dead shack

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As Connor and Whakahotu creeped into the petrified, ghostly oak trees surrounding  an abandoned shack. A light flickered from a boy's room but he had died 2 years ago. In a split second there was a gun fire and a scream and and another. “What was that?” wondered Connor.
Suddenly a witch appeared holding his son's chuck doll. The doll stood and moved towards them. Their hearts’ racing, a look of fear filled their faces. Connor & Whakahotu  started running...