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Friday, 18 August 2017

descriptive writing by whakahotu The mysterious cat

kia ora bloggers  

this is my character description from  this week please comment
if you have some think                                                                    the mysterious cat


One mysterious creature.  but guess what!  it has like a feather crown
And it has shiny golden rings circled around his tail.And looks like has a feather apex and it has dark red crimson  eyes and has a huge neck less. And has razor sharp claws. And it looks like with his feather tail looks like it could tickle people with his tail without looking. And it could control creatures with his murky  blooming eyes.And it looks like it would be a very

weird cat to have. And every time someone comes down the street they would stare at your house. It would look like a tiny lion.  Looks like a sad dad bad tiny lion

2 comments:

  1. Great job Whakahotu!
    I like how you used your adjectives.

    From Sienna

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  2. good job my friend i love how use good words to up level your work

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